Magazine Rough Idea

Feedback-

Person 1: "Not looking too bad however I think one way it could be improved is if you unify the colours a bit because it looks like everything has been made separately."

Person 2: "To me everything on the page looks really flat and on one level, theres nothing thats jumping of the page drawing me in."

Person 3: "I think that all of the details that have been included are good and is what would normally be included in a magazine design however there could be more to draw in the target audience and make the cover look more interesting."

Person 4: "One thing I don't like about this is the font choice at the bottom, I just don't think it matches the style of the rest of the cover."

My improvements-

To improve my magazine I will choose a colour scheme that compliments the cover and overall feel of the magazine. I will also add more detailed aspects onto what I have already included. I think that adding in shadowing onto some aspects will raise them off of the page making it stand out more and grasp the readers attention. I feel that changing colour, font and placing would benefit my magazine greatly. I hope that I have taken on any feedback that has been given and that it can be seen within my work.